Im so glad you dont write appaling poetry for me and put it up on your blog
just went through this poem written abt a girl....which utilises vocab such as tiramisu....( in the context of...you are my tiramisu)...and he manages to find a word that rhymes with that.....take my hat of to you....
does it sound any less ridiculous if we were to paraphrase and go...
you are my sweet cheese dessert...i think not....

and another amazing line....." stop being so hot"....
the writer here likens his love to a radiator

Seriously...how love sick can one be
for some reason...love sickness is getting on my nerves royally
why cant pple be dignified and normal when in a relationship
instead of cooing, simpering idiots( ok i didnt mean that....just liked the sound of that)
why do people completely stop being themselves.....i dont know....
god i am a grumpy old cow....
let me rant in peace.....

its 9 o clock now...my bed time...good night